Tuesday, 5 April 2011

writing short story

Finally, at 7.23a.m.,i managed to squeeze onto a bus. It was hot and stuffy and I was jammed between two people, making matters much worse. I suddenly became conscnious of the bus being at a standstill It had been at a standstill for several minutes. I wriggled to try see what was going ona nd a lady scolded me, 'It's only traffic jam. You've seen one before. Keep still.'

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